I am working on a graphic novel script just now. My first draft is almost complete and I am looking for someone to have a read over it and give me a few pointers in regard to the overall story and character development etc.

It is an Action Horror story about a man who must keep his family together as a town is attacked by ghastly subterranean creatures.

It is 133 script pages along (96 comic book pages). Please apply for job if interested, and let me know your rates. I prefer a flat-out price rather than an hourly rate if that's ok.