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Freelance Creative Writer & Article Writer

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Rick Natkin - Over 30 days ago
A couple of suggestions: You bring up things that bug you, and identify issues that you care about... But you don't add much in the way of critical analysis, or insightful approaches / solutions. It is rather vague and general. Put more of yourself, your ideas (not just "feelings") into this. ALSO - before you post things, you must be careful to proof for grammar & punctuation. e.g.: " But I am becoming more focused on how we can replaced some of the people in Congress." or "No one man can do it by themselves+ Also, look out for repetition like this: "There is reason why there is protesting going on right now in New York and other places. The people are not satisfied with the way the leaders are running this country right now."
That's all for ... right now!