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Freelance Blog Writer & Book Writer

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This is the second chapter of a story I'm currently working on. The basic gist of the story is that the main character, Shannon, tries to help a dysfunctional young man out of his depression, only to have him commit suicide in the end. However, she realizes that her time spent trying to help him wasn't wasted, because it actually helped her to work through many of her own problems. I included this chapter because it includes the most vivid and intense scene of the story so far (fighting scene at Panera Bread). I think it shows my strength with dialogue and developing characters, which I believe to be my best-developed areas of fiction writing. I attempted to use some descriptive language as well, though I would consider that something I'm working to get better at. I may post more sections of this work in progress as I get further into it!
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