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This is a fiction story, very loosely, based on a joyride my teenage daughter went on while spending the night with a friend.
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Fiction Writing
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Over 30 days ago

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Al Sirois - Over 30 days ago
This is good -- but I wish there was some dialog between the girls.
Brenda Smith - Over 30 days ago
Thanks, maybe I'll return to it one day. It was a college assignment from way back when. I lost my husband earlier this year and have been putting myself back together. It is time for me to get back in the game.
Al Sirois - Over 30 days ago
Very sorry to hear that. Feel free to tell me to **** off... but if you have stuff you'd like someone to look at let me know. I'm good for a critique or two.
Brenda Smith - Over 30 days ago
I may just let you do that. I have a bulk of writing sitting here and I'm hoping that I'll be able to do something with it.