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This is the edited version of fiction document #1.
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Roger's Portfolio RDS2@Q. - Over 30 days ago
Hello, My uncle Joseph Sexton is a fiction writer also. One of his books is "Warriors Afield". Have you seen it.

In this chapter one I was reading and wondered if you meant to say, " . . . pecked off the injured," on page one? It seems that "picked off" was meant.